THE SWORD OF DEMELZA
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I have just been notified that The Sword of Demelza has received Honorable Mention in the Writer's Digest 2013 eBook Awards.
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Jeanne
There's no time left. Christmas is only a day away, and instead of an endangered animal blog, this week I will offer the first chapter of my middle grade fantasy, The Sword of Demelza.
I hope your Christmas is wonderful and the New Year brings you success, good health and happiness.
Enjoy!
Jeanne
Aldon, Guardian of the Forest
Prologue
The sun was setting over Sunderland and Acadia Abbey.
Devon had fallen asleep on the lookout above the manicured grounds. His auburn
fur rippled in the summer breeze, and the white star on his forehead gleamed in
what remained of the late afternoon sunlight.
He was still young, but he was maturing quickly.
Although he was rash at times, he was a strong and clever fox. He loved the
monks of the abbey, especially Colum. The old bilby monk had taught him many
things about the wild world and soon he would be old enough to leave the abbey
and be a part of it. After the tragic death of his mother and father, Colum had
taken him in. Devon looked after Colum now that the small mouse-like marsupial
was beginning to age. The young fox was dedicated to him and the other monks of
the abbey as well. But he often thought
of the father and mother he lost. How different life would have been if the
tragedy had never happened, if he had never lost them. Still, he was happy here
at Acadia. He had all he needed, and life was peaceful. Peaceful, that is,
until today.
In the soft rustling of
sleep, Devon thought he heard the warning bell of the abbey ring. Startled, he
sprung to his feet. The warning bell,
he thought. Did I really hear it?
Drowsy from his nap, he stumbled as he sprinted toward the tower door. The bell
rang again. He stopped to glance over the wall. Cries could be heard rising
from the grounds below. Flames shot out from the windows of the scriptorium.
The monks of the abbey were running in every direction.
A troop of dragon
lizards approached on great hind claws, running up the slope from the billabong
toward the abbey. Devon had heard of the lizards but had never seen one. Colum once
told him about how they traveled alone in the western lands of Sunderland, but
these lizards were not loners. They were organized, clad in thick leather armor
and carrying flaming torches as they ran across the lawns from the forest.
Stunned, he placed his front paws on top of the rampart wall. Leaning over it,
he scanned the grounds below, trying to understand what was happening. He
gasped as one lizard threw a lit torch through an open window. Across the lawn,
near the gardens, two lizards laughed as they tossed a small monk between them.
One monk was being dragged across the lawn and down to the banks of the
billabong, where he was thrown into the water. Several lizards had broken
through the main gate. They are in the
abbey. The thought terrified him. Colum, he must reach Colum.
DRAGON LIZARD
Devon pushed away from the wall and ran. Flames and
acrid smoke met him as he opened the tower door. He buried his muzzle in the
crook of his arm and took a step inside. Fire was consuming the wooden
stairs. He began descending the steps,
leaping over the flames, but the steps and railing were burning. He could see
that the framework of the staircase was breaking away from the stone wall. It
began to shake beneath him, and the center pole holding it in place was
burning. He would not be able to descend the steps any farther. He threw
himself out toward the center post, grabbing it just as the stairs broke
beneath him. Flaming pieces of wood fell to the floor below, and hot embers
drifted up around him. He pushed away from the post and dropped the final
distance to the floor.
Huge wooden pillars and a series of immense wooden beams
supported the high-arched ceiling of the nave. He watched in horror as the
blaze grew from the floor toward the roof. The entrance to the scriptorium was
down a corridor at the far end of the nave. Devon sprinted toward it. As he turned into the scriptorium’s outer hallway, he found his
way blocked by a pile of smoking timbers.
“Father!” he screamed as he began to climb over the
debris. “Where are you?” There was no reply. A cracking sound came from above.
Startled, Devon lost his footing and fell to the stone floor. Over the noise of
the crumbling roof, Devon heard an evil, guttural growl. Turning toward the
sound, he saw a creature creeping toward him through the smoke and flames. It
was a thylacine. Its mouth, full of saber-like teeth, hung open and its wicked
yellow eyes drilled into his. From
somewhere in his memory, Devon recognized the knifelike canines, heard echoes
of its malevolent growl, and felt the same hatred he had felt years before
emanating from the evil beast. The wolf-like body was thin and half-striped
like that of a tiger, and its thick tail trailed behind it, scraping the stone
floor. Frozen with fear, Devon’s heart beat as though it would burst from his
chest. He shook his head in disbelief as he scrambled on all fours, backing
away.
“The Demon,” Devon whispered under his breath. Shivers
crept up his spine as memories came flooding back. Demon is what his father had
called the thylacine back on that fateful day.
“Yes, you can call me
that. But my name is Flitch!” The thylacine spat out his name like a curse. “I
remember you!” he hissed with satisfying surprise. “You are my unfinished
business.” Flitch took a step closer to Devon. “It’s so nice to see you,” he
said with an evil grin. “You got away once, but it won’t happen again.”
A loud crack from above
warned that a rafter was weakening. Devon ducked into a small alcove as a beam
crashed to the floor. It broke into
hundreds of sharp shards, sending burning projectiles in all directions. One
struck the thylacine in his hind leg, and he let out a scream of pain that
echoed throughout the abbey. He limped
toward Devon, who scrambled up the pile of smoldering wood to get away from
him. The injured thylacine attempted to follow, but he could not climb the
debris.
“Another day, Fox!” he snarled. Turning, he staggered
away.
Devon climbed over the debris and continued on into the
scriptorium. Desks were overturned, and smoking remains of illuminated texts
covered the floor like snow.
“Father! Answer me!”
Devon frantically peered through the smoke and scanned the ruins of his
father’s beloved library. He spied a small paw sticking out from under a large
desk at the far end of the room. The wall behind the desk had partially fallen
in and the stained glass window hung precariously in its frame. The setting sun
shone through what remained of the image of the sword and created beams of
light that covered the room in shades of blue and green. The center stone on
the sword’s hilt cast an eerie glow on the top of the desk. Holding his breath
Devon crossed the room and braced for the worst. With all his strength, he
groaned as he lifted the heavy oak desk. It toppled over, sending ashes flying
into the air, where they floated slowly, like phantoms, in the shafts of the
setting sunlight. Colum’s small body was curled in a ball seeming somehow even
smaller in death. Lifting his father, Devon’s tears flowed shamelessly. With
his father’s body resting in his arms, he left the abbey through a gap in the
wall where the dragons had torn down the stones.
Bilby monks ran frantically across the grounds and
fields outside the walls, putting out fires, attending to the wounded and
gathering the dead. He could see the dragon lizards heading away from the abbey
in the distance, their cruel laughter reaching his ears as they disappeared
into the forest. It was a vision that Devon would never forget. Once, long ago,
Colum had carried Devon to the safety and warmth of Acadia Abbey. He would now
carry his father away from the wreckage of the abbey and lay his body down on
the banks of the billabong.
FLITCH
As he knelt beside
Colum’s body, he tried to recall the lessons he had been taught. “See not with
just your eyes, Devon, but with your mind and heart as well. You are a part of
this wild world, and cannot separate yourself from it.”
His thoughts drifted
back to their talk earlier in the day.
He was leaning over Colum’s shoulder. He had stood there
with his paws clasped tightly behind his back watching Colum’s quill move
smoothly across the parchment. The illuminated texts produced by the mouse-like
bilby monks of Acadia Abbey were beautifully drawn and painted with vibrant
colors, etched in gold leaf. The texts were a treasure known throughout
Sunderland. They not only contained the history of the abbey, but hinted at its
mysteries as well.
For Devon, the greatest mystery was the image of the sword
in the large stained glass window. Devon glanced up; the window dominated the
scriptorium and the grounds of the abbey. In the middle of the window an image
of a magnificent sword pointed toward the earth. The glass was stained a deep
green at the center of the sword’s hilt, where the legendary emerald stone of
Demelza was depicted. No one at the abbey was certain where the sword was, but
Devon knew that many stories of its powers had been told. Tinted rays of light
poured down into the scriptorium from the colored glass panes. Colum had yet to
tell Devon the significance of the sword, though he had asked about it many
times. Why would a sword in a stained glass window dominate a peaceful abbey
such as Acadia? What was its importance?
Had Colum become
shorter over the years, or maybe I have become taller, Devon thought. He
now towered over Colum. He wore a golden
muslin vest over dark blue pants. A belt was cinched tightly around his vest at
the waist. A small dagger and leather pouch hung from the belt.
“Father, you said you
would tell me about the abbey’s beginnings.” With his eyes still lingering on
the sword’s image, he rested his chin on his father’s shoulder, continuing his
quick chatter. “How did the bilbies become monks and build the abbey?”
The small scratching of Colum’s quill hesitated briefly,
and Devon’s eyes were drawn to the parchment. Encouraged by the pause, Devon
pressed on. “You promised to tell me about Aldon, the Great Numbat that saved
them—how they built the abbey to honor him. And the sword, Father, it was his
sword, wasn’t it? Aldon’s sword would be a better weapon than that old wooden
staff you found with me all those years ago.”
“Yes, yes, my son!” He
laughed. “I did promise to tell you of the sword, didn’t I?” Colum placed his
quill in the inkwell and shifted the worn brown fabric of his monk’s habit.
Dropping to the floor from his stool, he stood before Devon. The top of his
head came to Devon’s waist. “When did you grow so tall?” He laughed, tugging
playfully on the tip of Devon’s vest. “You are certainly not the small kit I
carried from the forest so long ago; along with that old staff, as you call it.
You may yet find that ancient staff to be useful, my son. I have a feeling that
it may have more meaning, and more power than we know.”
Devon bent down and
hugged his father, lifting him off the floor.
Releasing him from his arms, he set him back down. “Power in a wooden
staff?” Devon chuckled. “All I know for sure is that it was a lucky day for me and
a terrible one…” A shiver passed through him as he thought of the terrible
creature that had killed his father and mother. He recalled the horrifying
image of the beast attacking them. He could see its sharp teeth. Its
frightening voice shook him to his very core. The memory haunted his dreams. “I
don’t know what I would have done if you hadn’t happened along.”
“It was the will of
Aldon that I found you that day,” Colum said quietly. He shook his head as he
looked up at Devon. “I am as lucky as you, my dear boy. I am lucky to have had you by my side all
these years.” He took Devon’s paw in his. “Alright, my son, if you want to know
more about the abbey, I’ll tell you.” Touching a claw to his forehead in
contemplation, he said, “What have we discussed thus far? My memory is not as
good as it once was.”
Devon barked a laugh.
“You bilbies may as well have taken a vow of silence for all that you told me
thus far. All I know is what I see; it’s
a building of stone and wood and it overlooks the waters of Kakadu Billabong.” He thought about the lovely red lilies
covering the surface of the lake, about how the monks of the abbey spent many
hours lost in meditation along its banks. The bilbies, small animals with
pointy inquisitive noses and long ears that stood up stiffly on their heads,
were quick and lively, and took great pride in their abbey. Not only had they
been his family all these years, they were also known by many of the forest
inhabitants for their charity and caring nature.
“I love it here. But, still, I have so many questions,
questions that you promised to answer for me.”
“You’re right, my son.
But right now I would like to finish my work while the sun still shines on my
parchment. Tonight we’ll have dinner on the banks of the billabong and we’ll
talk.” Colum hopped back up onto his stool. “I have a few more hours before the
sunlight leaves the scriptorium. Then I’ll tell you everything.” He grinned at Devon, his bright eyes
sparkling in the light that shone down through the stained glass window.
“Ok.” Devon
grinned. Placing one arm gently across Colum’s back, he said softly, “One day
soon I’ll leave the abbey. I’ll go out on my own. You know this.” Colum looked
up at Devon and Devon saw sorrow in Colum’s eyes. “I’ll visit the Wingcarrabee
Swamp. And perhaps I’ll make it as far as the Pinnacles Desert. I’ll visit all
the places you’ve told me about, and I’ll tell everyone I meet about the
wonderful monks of Acadia Abbey.”
“Yes, yes, you are
certainly old enough to set out on your own.” Colum looked down at his paws and
rubbed them nervously. “I was hoping you might stay one more season.”
“We don’t have to talk about that now, Father.”
Colum hesitated for a moment then waved at Devon,
shooing him off.
“Run along now, you young rascal!”
Devon turned and walked
toward the doors of the scriptorium.
“I’m going up the tower to the parapet walk,” he said over his shoulder.
“I’ll be back for dinner.” He listened to Colum laugh as he walked out the
immense double doors.
Heading through the nave of the abbey toward the tower,
he noticed two monks coming toward him. The parapet walk was high enough above
the abbey to serve as a lookout, and the monks took turns watching over the
grounds.
”Brother Alfred, Brother Edgar,” Devon nodded,
acknowledging them, and they nodded in return, smiling up at Devon.
“Taking watch on the parapet this afternoon, Devon?”
Alfred asked. “Or will you just be napping up there?” The two monks chuckled to
themselves, holding their paws in front of their snouts, trying hard not to
laugh out loud.
“You know me too well,” Devon replied with a smile and a
wave of his paw.
At the top of the tower he opened the door and stepped
out onto the walk. He strolled toward the crenellated wall. Leaning over the
wall, Devon looked out across the grounds of the abbey. A wide expanse of grass
gradually ended at the edge of the waters of the billabong and the hills of
Sunderland rose up on the far side of the lake. From his vantage point he could
see several monks working in the gardens, while others were engaged in quiet
conversation or reading beside the sparkling water. It was peaceful. He moved
to the other side of the walkway and settled down. Leaning his back against the
stone wall, he closed his eyes to rest for a bit.
***
Now, Colum rested on the banks of the billabong. Raising
his eyes toward the ruined monastery, Devon saw a small group of monks
gathering on the lawn. They spoke
quietly with one another, a mixture of fear, worry, and sadness etched on their
faces.
He continued to gaze at the abbey and the remains of the
stained-glass window. The sword’s colors were dark now that evening approached.
What was the purpose of the sword? The image of a terrible weapon meant only to
bring harm and pain had always seemed a strange object for the peace-loving
monk’s abbey. The sword seemed to shimmer with a life of its own in the evening
light. For a moment, he thought he saw the thylacine standing beneath the tip
of the sword, but it was just his imagination. He drew in a deep breath, and
then dropped his head to look at Colum. He vowed to find out why this happened
and who had brought this destruction down upon the abbey. He would have to look
deeper, as his father had taught him.
The mystery of the sword would remain for now. There were other
questions that needed answers. He may never understand why a sword was
emblazoned in the stained glass window, but that didn’t matter anymore. Colum
was gone. The time for stories and mysteries was over. He furrowed his brow and
narrowed his eyes as anger took hold. There was only time for revenge. He would
take up his own weapon, the ancient wooden staff that Colum had found with him
so many years ago. Devon knew nothing of
its powers, but he would wield it against those who had brought pain and terror
to his home. He would hunt down the dragon lizards. He would kill the
thylacine. He would make them pay for what they had done this day, for what
they had done to his father.
The screech of an owl
echoed through the woods beyond the billabong, and a feeling of dread came over
Devon. The time had come for him to leave the place he had come to know as
home.
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